Saturday, August 05, 2006

a to zee

Be an answer to those unanswered questions
Be the breeze that dries my sweat off
Be the cloud that provides me shade
Be the danger that makes me bold
Be the enigma for which I search an answer
Be the fire that keeps me awake
Be a goader who pushes me to reach the destiny
Be the horizon towards which I keep walking
Be the innocence that saves me from trouble
Be that joy in my life for which I pray
Be the kiss that wipes off the pain
Be the love that makes me humane
Be the mild sunshine that gives me light
Be the night that provides me sleep
Be the orchestra that makes the music for my life
Be the pain that I can bear when I am hurt
Be the quote that stays in my mind forever
Be the rain that blooms my life
Be the song that will cool me off
Be the time that sees every second of my life
Be the undertaker who buries off my worries
Be the victory that I crave for
Be the water that flows through my throat
Be the Xanadu where I can live in
Be that BIG 'yes' I say after every triumph
Be the zenith on which I must always be...

That is me unedited... a few years ago: to be precise, I wrote it sometime in May, 2001


Srini said...

Awesome !

Anonymous said...

not bad i should say..!
But as you had yourself admitted, a good editor would do you a great good. get one, or better, be one. Choosing is very much part of the writing process.

Sorry for the gyan. It comes easy if you are elder.

You know who!

reNUka said...

thanks srini!! :-)

yeah... anon, i am realising it. anyway, thanks for repeating the oft-repeated advice tht i hear frm you. :-)

Anupama Viswanathan said...

cool..Nice concept!:)..dont see you blogging too often these days..How is life? :)

CS said...

wow.. its been a long time since i saw this one..!! And i guess u've come a long way since u wrote this.. :)

reNUka said...

Hey anu!! :-)
Thanks a ton for visiting and commenting... Yeah, i know it has been a long time and i feel so rusted :-( got busy with work for the past 3 months... have to get started again.

C S - if i am not wrong u must have been the person who read 'a to zee' first... anyway lemme wait n watch. :-)
thanks for visitng and commenting.

Anonymous said...

nice way to tell the being of real-self in everything[a-z]..
this one is d best:
Be the zenith on which I must always be

nice to land here..

reNUka said...

welcome home n thanks for the comment, roy!! :-)
and i am really sorry for the really late acknowledgement of your comment! :-(

surya said...

hey nice blog...
gud to stumble upon it....

reNUka said...

welcome home n thanks, surya!! :-)

Sara said...

Looks good, so what are you now? :)) Check my blog for my sketches, scanned them recently :)

reNUka said...

hi saravanan! sorry that i completely missed your comment :-(
i am nothin - i may be able to define my past-myself, a few years later :D