i was looking at a blue-black thick blanket,
trimmed at the edges and curved like tree-tops,
pinned up to a light-blue display board.
and just when I took my eyes off,
flickers of pinkish white light
shimmered from the thick of the blanket
and showed me a few more hidden tree-tops.
soon, revelation came along;
they were the potential rain-bearing clouds,
waiting for the wind to unfurl its flourishes!
trimmed at the edges and curved like tree-tops,
pinned up to a light-blue display board.
and just when I took my eyes off,
flickers of pinkish white light
shimmered from the thick of the blanket
and showed me a few more hidden tree-tops.
soon, revelation came along;
they were the potential rain-bearing clouds,
waiting for the wind to unfurl its flourishes!
7 comments:
revelation indeed!
(y)
vellialae thoonganiyaakum!!!?
maheshc.
p.s.: you have fallen in an irrevocable love with words !!!
hi s m i t h a! :-)
whts that (y)?
oi mahesh! ada paavi!! naan bus-la guindy pakkama poikittirundhaena..., appo skies-la eppadi thaan irnudhudhu da!! :-)
and thanks for the postscript mahesh :D u made my day!! :-)
(y) is an msn emoticon for thumbs up :).
I liked your comments to your bro :)
keshav!!! - the same keshav who i know?
and yeah, thanks for the explanation!! :-)
(y)
wookie! glad u liked them!! :-)
yes u know me..not sure if u remember me...message me on yahoo if u remember ;-)
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